Shit Happens

Tuesday, March 08, 2005

Thank You Letter #2

This is what I decided on. Just say you would hire me.

Dear,

It was very enjoyable speaking with you on Friday. I appreciate the time that you took to interview me for this opportunity.

The communications specialist position is a good match for my background and interest in both creative, and professional, writing. At Bradley University I enrolled in an extensive array of writing classes; those classes, in addition to my employment experience, make me an ideal candidate for this opening. I would really enjoy performing the writing, editing, and proofreading tasks associated with this position.

Please contact me if you need any additional writing samples. I will call you in a few days for more news of your selection.

Thanks again!

Sincerely yours,

4 Comments:

  • At 9:46 AM, Blogger K- said…

    I like this one better. It seems to flow and reiterate what may have been talked about or not talked about in the interview. It points out the positives to keep them fresh in their minds.

     
  • At 10:15 AM, Blogger Marilyndrew said…

    nearly every sentence in the first one began with "I" so I changed it

     
  • At 11:26 AM, Blogger JLHB said…

    In this phrase, "in both creative, and professional, writing." I think you can get rid of the comma after professional. Then, I would hire you :)! XO- Jess

     
  • At 12:17 PM, Blogger Marilyndrew said…

    i thought you could too, but i put them in just in case *shrug*

     

Post a Comment

Links to this post:

Create a Link

<< Home