Thank You Letter #2
This is what I decided on. Just say you would hire me.
Dear,
It was very enjoyable speaking with you on Friday. I appreciate the time that you took to interview me for this opportunity.
The communications specialist position is a good match for my background and interest in both creative, and professional, writing. At Bradley University I enrolled in an extensive array of writing classes; those classes, in addition to my employment experience, make me an ideal candidate for this opening. I would really enjoy performing the writing, editing, and proofreading tasks associated with this position.
Please contact me if you need any additional writing samples. I will call you in a few days for more news of your selection.
Thanks again!
Sincerely yours,
Dear,
It was very enjoyable speaking with you on Friday. I appreciate the time that you took to interview me for this opportunity.
The communications specialist position is a good match for my background and interest in both creative, and professional, writing. At Bradley University I enrolled in an extensive array of writing classes; those classes, in addition to my employment experience, make me an ideal candidate for this opening. I would really enjoy performing the writing, editing, and proofreading tasks associated with this position.
Please contact me if you need any additional writing samples. I will call you in a few days for more news of your selection.
Thanks again!
Sincerely yours,
posted by Marilyndrew @ 9:28 AM
4 Comments:
At 9:46 AM,
K- said…
I like this one better. It seems to flow and reiterate what may have been talked about or not talked about in the interview. It points out the positives to keep them fresh in their minds.
At 10:15 AM,
Marilyndrew said…
nearly every sentence in the first one began with "I" so I changed it
At 11:26 AM,
JLHB said…
In this phrase, "in both creative, and professional, writing." I think you can get rid of the comma after professional. Then, I would hire you :)! XO- Jess
At 12:17 PM,
Marilyndrew said…
i thought you could too, but i put them in just in case *shrug*
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